Danielle Hamilton

My Website- https://12hamiltond.wixsite.com/mysite

1st draft-  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=14nLgAYnzjc 2nd draft-  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GvNmFKcgxMw My First Draft Reflection & what I changed My first draft consisted of a montage of summer clips of two girls' summer. The video's representation's are location and gender. The videos starts with the artist 'Kygo', travelling abroad, going to the beach with her friend. Then changing location to a festival, then London, then back to the festival. They meet two boys on the way who shares the rest of their summer with them. The changes I was told to make was: change the font of my logo and the song title, as well as adding the artists name under the song title as they look too basic when the singer starts singing at 0.37 seconds into the song, the change of location needs to match up to the change in the song  at 1.50 seconds, the shot is out of focus and needs to be changed or deleted  remove the next scene of the girls with red eyes  ...